Pitch Contest with Natalie Fischer

I've entered the pitch contest with Natalie Fischer on YAtopia and thought you all might be interested in my two sentence pitch.  I highly suggest for every one of you to join the contest!


Story Name: RUPERT REGINALD ROBINSON, THE NINTH & THE MYSTERIOUS HOUSE NEXT DOOR


Genre: middle-grade


2 Sentence Pitch:  Rupert lives in his imagination to escape his stern Aunt Miriam and the bully who tortures him at school.  A simple errand to his neighbor’s house reveals the very thing he hasn't dreamed up is exactly what is true: make-believe creatures come to life in his next door neighbor's house. 


Opening sentence:  Rupert Reginald Robinson clutched a thick book to his chest; his forehead rested against the glass of the backseat car window. 




I'm going to post my query here in the next couple days.  I would love it if you all would come back and tear it to pieces...by that, I mean give me amazing constructive critiques that will make it amazing!